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Dad Told Me to Take Cold Showers with the Soap He Gave Me — When My Boyfriend Walked into My Bathroom, He Started Crying
Growing up, my dad always had a no-nonsense approach to life. He believed in discipline, hard work, and practicality. He wasn’t one for long lectures, but when he gave advice, he expected me to follow it without question.
A few months ago, he handed me a bar of soap—an old-fashioned, plain, brownish block that smelled earthy and strong. “Use this every day. And take cold showers,” he said.
I wrinkled my nose. “Why cold showers?”
“It’s good for you,” he replied simply. “Just trust me.”
At first, I thought it was just one of his quirky lessons. Maybe it was a health tip or a way to build resilience. So, I did as he said. The cold water was a shock at first, but over time, I got used to it. The soap, though odd-smelling, left my skin feeling clean and refreshed.
I didn’t think much of it until my boyfriend, Jake, came over one evening. We had been dating for over a year, and he was finally comfortable enough to let himself in when I was in the shower.
That night, I had just finished rinsing off when I heard the bathroom door creak open. “Hey, I just need to grab something—hope you don’t mind,” Jake called out.
“No problem,” I replied, wiping the steam off the mirror.
Then, suddenly, there was a long silence. I turned around to see Jake standing frozen, staring at the soap on the sink. His eyes welled up with tears.
“Jake? What’s wrong?” I asked, concerned.
He took a shaky breath and picked up the bar of soap. His hands trembled as he turned it over. “Where did you get this?” he asked, his voice barely above a whisper.
“My dad gave it to me,” I said, confused. “Why?”
He exhaled sharply, rubbing his forehead. “This… this is the soap they gave us in the shelter when I was a kid.”
My heart stopped. Jake had told me bits and pieces about his past—how he and his mother had spent years in a homeless shelter after his father abandoned them. He rarely spoke about those times, but I knew they had been incredibly hard on him.
“I haven’t seen this soap in years,” he murmured. “I used to hate it because it meant we were struggling. But it also meant safety. It meant we had a place to stay.” He looked at me, his eyes filled with emotion. “Why would your dad give you this?”
A sudden realization hit me. My father had grown up poor, too—something he rarely spoke about. Maybe he had given me the soap not just as a practical item, but as a quiet lesson in humility and gratitude.
I hugged Jake tightly. “Maybe he just wanted to remind me of something important.”
Jake wiped his tears and smiled softly. “Your dad is a wise man.”
And in that moment, I knew he was right.
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